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You sat on the park bench, staring into space. The soft patter of the rain on the leaves kept you from drifting off and it helped soothed the pain.  You watched the events of the past hour run thru your head, each time more vivid than the last. Unable to bare it anymore, you cussed yourself out.
"Why am I so damn stupid!" you shouted, punching a nearby tree, shock waves running up your arm. You quickly pulled it back, and cradled it, the pain slowly easing. You looked down at your arm, your eyes widening. The busies seemed darker in the rain, and a few cut's had started to bleed. You gulped, and hung your head, your arm limply hanging by your side.
"(Name)?" You head shot up.
"A-Alfred." You stuttered, putting your arm's behind your back. But Alfred had already seen them. You looked away, tears pricking your eyes. You felt something drop on your shoulders. You looked back at Alfred, your eyes wide.
"Alfred." It was barley a whisper, but he heard it.
"Keep it." He mumbled, shivering as the wind blew. You thrust the jacked back at him, but he pushed it away.
"You need it more than I do." He said, before he took off running.
"Alfred, wait!" you shouted, but it was useless. He was already gone.
So, iv had this idea for a while, and i dont know how to start it, so, id figured i'll let you read a little, and tell my if you like it.

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EDIT: this scean comes later on in the story, so dont freak out when i dont countinue from here, k?

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Part 2: [link]
Part 3: [link]
Part 4: [link]
Part 5: [link] end
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MurderScreamer Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Professional General Artist
: :3 I luvs it <3
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GhostRain1412 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
=)
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Meili-Qiang Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012
YOU MUST CONTINUE JEFREKMGERKGL
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:iconghostrain1412:
GhostRain1412 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I SHALL!
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Meili-Qiang Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012
:D
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Nicky-Hetalia Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012
I want ot know what happens next!!!!
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GhostRain1412 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
=)
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RAE8892 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I am intrigued! I so want to know what happens next! Please continue?
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:iconghostrain1412:
GhostRain1412 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ok. =)
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AnimeLeaderVI Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
OMG
Please have more soon!~!!
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GhostRain1412 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i'll work on it =)
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AnimeLeaderVI Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012
YAY~!!!
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utachan13 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
Yay!! I love dis so far! :)
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:iconghostrain1412:
GhostRain1412 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks.
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ArtisticallyDerpy Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
;A;
.....
......can`t wait for more... <3
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GhostRain1412 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'll work on it.
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ArtisticallyDerpy Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconyaymaidamericaplz:
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Hersheypup Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Student Artist
Awesome >w<
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:iconghostrain1412:
GhostRain1412 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank's
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Hersheypup Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Student Artist
Your Welcome ^-^
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tokio616 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
i love it so far ^_^
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:iconghostrain1412:
GhostRain1412 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks
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tokio616 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Your welcome ^_^
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Charleywren Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Alfred copyrighted me? ..... Well alright..
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:iconghostrain1412:
GhostRain1412 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
=)
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stupidbread Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
Why you gotta make it so short?
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:iconghostrain1412:
GhostRain1412 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:shrug: i'll make the chapter's longer.
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Jel0e Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Student General Artist
This is kinda sad, but I like it.
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:iconghostrain1412:
GhostRain1412 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thank's, it'll get happier.
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Jel0e Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Student General Artist
You're welcome.
Okay.
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GhostRain1412 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
=)
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Jel0e Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Student General Artist
:meow:
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